Good Girl

Dear Diary,

Mommy finally called the doctor for my ear ouchy.  He made a house call.  This time I took off my clothes like a good girl.  Without complaining. He called me pretty, but my mom didn’t hear him.  No one did.


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42 thoughts on “Good Girl

  1. “No one did” is such a chilling final word for this. It must be so difficult to put yourself back into that place to write from your personal experience as a child…..but your voice is being heard now. Thank you for speaking up on such a difficult topic. Your voice is being heard, powerfully.

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  2. This truly does hurt. 42 words to say so much, to share a whole realm of thoughts and emotions, to encompass so much hurt. I wish you peace, and hope this help you on your path.

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  3. Damn. I like what you did with the layers of pain here: the “ear ouchy” a superficial covering over the real pain and trauma underneath. Very well done. Thank you for trusting us with this story.

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    1. Thank you for the encouragement. I’ll be glad when this challenge is over. I’m pretty sure I would be fine if I never had to think about it ever again. We all have something like that in life, I suppose.

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